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Friday, October 23, 2009  

  *** Thunder Road

rainy night

I sat in the car tonight and watched as the street lights came on.
I feel your absence and it pains me to think that you can walk away so easily.
Bruce Springsteen was playing as you pulled the door open and ducked out into the pouring rain.

Thunder Road
The screen door slams, Mary's dress waves
Like a vision she dances across the porch as the radio plays
Roy Orbison singing for the lonely
Hey, that's me and I want you only
Don't turn me home again, I just can't face myself alone again


It was not a good night for us. Not a good week truth be told. The connection just wasn't there. We made love in the shower and snuggled together as we watched movies, but somehow we never got beyond superficial.

Don't run back inside, darling, you know just what I'm here for
So you're scared and you're thinking that maybe we ain't that young anymore
Show a little faith, there's magic in the night
You ain't a beauty but, hey, you're alright
Oh, and that's alright with me


And then you were gone, your head bowed against the rain. Not looking back. I wanted to throw my door open and run after you in the rain. To grab you and shake you. I wanted to be able to reach the deepest part of you again. I wanted to beg you to stay with me a little longer. To unruffle your feathers, to make you feel me, really feel me, but more and more I cannot find the right words.

And so I let you go. A dark figure that blended and finally faded into the growing shadows. I sat in my car and listened to the music. I watched as the raindrops danced and fell; lovers entwining and separating as they slid down my windshield.

I don't know where to go from here.



Bruce Springsteen Thunder Road tunesdaily.com

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      • At 5:23 AM, Blogger MKL said…

        Good story, wow.

        We made love in the shower and snuggled together as we watched movies

        I feel this part was already worth it. As for Springsteen.. you gotta love the Boss. I love Thunder road and can sing along. I have most of his sings. You reminded me to listen to him again :-)


         
      • At 10:15 AM, Blogger T said…

        MKL, the physical connection usually brings me into harmony, but lately I'm just not feeling myself at all. Maybe it's the change of the seasons?

        I love the rain. It makes my world a very insulated, safe place. I've always found my peace in big waters and stormy weather. But not right now. I feel untouchable.

        The Boss is great.
        I'm a long time fan myself.


         
      • At 11:25 AM, Blogger 13messages said…

        That's one of my favorite songs ever. Then again, most of the Springsteen songbook would fit that description.

        What you wrote moved my heart.


         
      • At 11:44 AM, Blogger T is for Trouble said…

        13, the rain is still coming down.
        Usually I love that. Not right now.

        Springsteen wrote the soundtrack of my life. I can't think back to a time when his music wasn't a part of me.


         
      • At 2:43 AM, Blogger Michael Manning said…

        T-I love how you interwove the two themes together. I saw The Boss three times in concert and this song was his sort of answer to West Side Story...to me. lol!!! :)


         
      • At 2:41 PM, Anonymous emma b. said…

        I hate that feeling of not really feeling "in your body" and disconnected - and even the rain is not comforting! Maybe it is the change of seasons that in-between limbo. Be well!


         
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      • At 12:39 AM, Blogger T is for Trouble said…

        Michael, Bruce has calmed down quite a bit in his performances. I remember him running across the stage, sliding over the top of the piano and never missing a guitar stroke. The perfect contortionist/ musician.


         
      • At 12:40 AM, Blogger T is for Trouble said…

        Emma B, there's definitely something in the air. The winds of change perhaps?


         
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      • At 11:05 AM, Anonymous Nothing Profound said…

        Nice tone poem. It can't always be perfect. At least you had the rain.


         
      • At 10:48 PM, Blogger T is for Trouble said…

        Nothing Profound, You are nothing but... Profound.

        Puddles were made for jumping into.
        I'm sure you know what I mean.


         
      • At 2:40 PM, Blogger WDKY said…

        Gorgeous prose, but then you're a wordsmith... it comes naturally to you. As for the question you end with, you already know the answer, T - it's a good question, nonetheless.

        What i really want to know is whether you've seen S Darko, and - if you have - whether you're as undecided as I am about it.


         
      • At 10:26 PM, Blogger T is for Trouble said…

        WDKY, I ve taken to sitting in my car a lot lately;) We've been flooding here, not that we didn't need the rain, but honestly. It's not been a fit night for man nor beast for at least a week.

        You know where I'd go if I had my druthers. But B might not like that. A little crowded wouldn't you say?

        S. Darko was the demise of a beautiful, dark, creative force. Donnie Darko took you on a journey, it made you realize how everything we do, every interaction with another human being, links us in some ephemeral way. At the point in the movie when it all starts going in reverse you see how one event changed the future for all of them. I watch that movie and think about the decisions I've made in my own life and how my life might be so different today.

        S. Darko was just another teen movie that never reached anything near the depth of it's predecessor. The only thing missing was Miley Cyrus as Samantha. Bah!


         
      • At 2:21 PM, Blogger WDKY said…

        Yes, you've summed it up perfectly. I only saw it a couple of nights ago, and I was bitterly disappointed. In fact, I'm going to try to erase the experience from my memory completely.

        Crowded? Yes, I guess it would be. Still...


         
      • At 2:02 AM, Blogger Ken Albin said…

        Ah, but men have such difficulty in showing their inner feelings. That's part of what makes us so endearing and frustrating at the same time.


         
      • At 9:12 AM, Blogger Blasé said…

        There is always next time??


        Peace and Love


         
      • At 2:55 PM, Blogger Michael Manning said…

        Thinking back, T, that album had a sense of magic to it. With this in mind, I feel you will have many more positive experiences ahead filled with Joy and Hope! :)


         
      • At 10:38 PM, Blogger rage said…

        I am not that big a fan of the boss, but I do like the picture.

        Either way, well done.


         


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